Zafiro’s Shorts
One of the great things I learned in my MFA program was how to read as a writer. In my very first class, the instructor told us (the students) that it didn’t matter whether we liked the books we were assigned to read. It was more important to learn how to figure out what was working, deconstruct what the writer did to make it work, and then steal that technique for our own prose. The program trained me so well that I have trouble turning the analyzing and deconstructing off. There are times when I’d like to read a book just for the pleasure of getting to know the characters and getting lost in a well crafted plot. I want to get back to being a reader and try to zone out the nagging voice behind me that points out clever craft tricks on the pages.
Reading Frank Zafiro’s short story collection Dead Even was one of those times when it was a possible to both get lost in the words on the page and enjoy picking apart the author’s technique. Zafiro put together the collection with the assumption that the readers were already familiar with his River City series. Those novels are written in third person and one of the things I so enjoyed in Dead Even was spending time with familiar characters in first person. Katie MacLeod is by far my favorite character of Zafiro’s and the first story in the collection, “Last Day in Paradise,” is in Katie’s voice and takes place twelve years after Under a Raging Moon. There are two more stories about Katie, both told in third person, and each gives me a different perspective of her character than I got from the River City series.
It’s great fun for readers to visit with old friends and finding out more about them, but it must also have been a blast for Zafiro to thoroughly explore his characters this way. I sometimes try out scenes from alternate points of view and then decide which one works best, but have never thought about exploring characters through both third and first person writing. Usually I pick one perspective and then stick with it for that character. Since reading Dead Even, I’ve been switching between first and third person during free writing sessions and love how it opens up new aspects of my characters that I wouldn’t have discovered if I’d stuck to just one voice. Read more »


